This new outline going over the altered storyline is shorted than the first. Mostly because I tried to focus on following the story and not shot by shot as I've done before. I realized I didn't need to detail each shot in the outline, as it would be showed in the storyboard anyway. And the storyboard would focus on each shot instead of following the story. I feel like that way everything is easier to keep up with and more organized.
When I wrote down this outline, I still hadn't decided on the characters's name. So I think I should say now that Character #1's name, the girl who takes a nap and the main character, is Jocelyn. And Character #2's, the girl who dies, Cassie. Given that I chose to keep the storytelling simple, I also decided to a voiceover narrated by Jocelyn. Not explaining the situation, but to explore her train of thought. I know narrations are cliche on opening scenes, but otherwise I feel like my video would be too boring and it also wouldn't make sense with some sort of context.
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