The outline for my film opening is...well there is no lining in it. It's more of a brain dump of how I want the story to develop. And a guide to how to construct my storyboard. I'm also unsure on how to end the film opening, but I'll have to ask from my peers and instructor's advice for sure.
Here's a screenshot of the outline I have for my film opening:
What I’ve been conflicted about is the ending. I’m not sure if I should leave it like I have it on my outline, or include an scene in the funeral to explain further. Let me explain, the film opening shows character #1’s death how character #2 remembers it. Character #1’s death is claimed an accident, as it would be revealed in the eulogy. But character #2 would question this as they are friends and she knows how her friend was a good swimmer. I’m just not sure on how to reveal the last part, through conversation or the eulogy.
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