IT'S DONE! (thank god)
Leaving everything for last minute is my specialty. It doesn't seem like it, as I've keep track so far of the project...but really I'm being productive because I'm avoiding doing other parts of the project. Like the CCR. I don't know why but that seems like the most intimidating part of this entire project. Perhaps it is because of the format, and the fast that I have to answer the question as myself. It's not like I'm playing a character like I've done in other stages of this project.
Either way, I know it is a part of the project I have to complete. No matter how terrified I am to appear on video so focused on me and what I have to say. So it's safe to say I will be going with a format which allows me to not appear on camera. I'm hoping it will help with taking some of the shyness away from me. I'm very nervous, and dreading having to work on it. But it's not like a have an option so...see you with an update on that!
Well, not everything is a struggle like editing and shooting and scheduling as been, I guess. Some good thing have come out out the darkness! One of them being the narrated voice-over. I weirdly enjoyed acting with only my voice, even if I still cringe like i would with a video. Because yeah, the narration comes from the character of Jocelyn, played by my sister, but she is my sister and her kindness only lasts until she gets something out of it. So I couldn't rely on her help for the narrated voiceover. Thankfully our voices are extremely similar, according to the people around us. So it's not like it's a huge deal.
Trying to down like a man, that's the funny part. I would've asked my dad, but as he doesn't speak english, I'd taken longer spelling syllable by syllable than just doing it myself. So I did, voicing the police officer holding the voluntary interview for Jocelyn. Although I tried deepening it, I just sounded like I was making fun of someone' voice. Instead, I recorded my voice as normal and then added voice effects to it. As I didn't know how to do this in Adobe, I went to another app, CapCut so I could edit that and then transport it back to Adobe Premier and finish editing. This is how the sound editing portion looked on CapCut:
The most dreaded part, after acting ... editing! It's not like I don't enjoy it, because I actually really do. I find it relaxing and kind of mind numbing after importing all of the clips. But that's where my headache starts. Adobe Premier NEVER does what I want it to do when it comes to importing. For some unknown reason, because I already tried to investigate, Adobe on my personal computer refuses to import the clips correctly. It just imports the audio with a blank screen. And obviously I can't do anything with that. But, desperate times call for desperate measures, right?
<- (actually footage of me working)
So I threw a tantrum like a five year old after hours of fighting with Adobe.
After that I was fine though, and I ended up editing on my dad's computer. Which would've been fine if he didn't work from home and I literally only have the evenings to edit. But it's okay, thank god I chose for a simplistic editing opening scene instead of anything experimental. If I had gotten creative, I would be suffering the consequences hard. But the good news of using my dad's computer is that it works. Literally the only good thing because since it is an entirely different computer from mine, I feel like a cute little old lady trying to FaceTime her grandchildren. Except the keyboard is also in Spanish and for some reason that's supposed to mean that none of the universal demand like Control+C don't work. It's frustrating, and definitely an obstacle I didn't need, but I'll get by ... I guess
Shooting went great! At least, I'm pleased with all the shots I got and the weather was working in my favor that day, thankfully. With my script and storyboard, I was scared I wouldn't have enough footage and that I had overestimated how long each take was going to be. But by just glancing over the clips, I think I have to cut some scenes out!
Although everything didn't go super smooth either. The park and area we were in for shooting was empty, so that didn't bother me. What I'm annoyed and worried about how it will look by the end is any of the car scenes. The lighting wasn't working in m favor inside the car, and the camera was extremely shaky despite being in a tripod. Adding to that, I had shots outside of the car in the park's parking lot but the cars kept coming and going so you can see the messed up continuity. It's not that big of a deal, and it's not like I could ask people to move their cars, especially when the parking lot was full. But small details like that bother me the most when it comes to projects.
Something I dreaded though, was acting in front of the camera. Neither me or my sister are any good when it comes to acting, so every shot took several takes for it to come out right as we couldn't take ourselves seriously. It was fun, but I'm still not prepare to die of cringe when I start editing. An unexpected enemy turned out to be the bees at the park. I'm completely terrified of them, so when I saw one when trying to shot something I couldn't help but sprint the other way. Thank god none of them stung me, because that would have made me stop everything to go cry.
It's frustrating when the problems in form of you are out of your hands. In my case, my problem is being unable to film this week due to not having time. As I need two girls in my opening scene to act, I casted my sister as Jocelyn and myself as Cassie. I thought it was perfect because as my sister, she couldn't really say no to me. But I think I underestimated how busy she was going to get when having an internship to get done. So her time to film was either very limited, which turned into barely anything. Or being already dark when she's available.
I've been attempting, but failing, to cage her in right when she gets home so we can record. But that's also difficult since I work after school and have overall conflicting schedules. Fortunately, we manage to squeeze in a day over the weekend to record. I wouldn't have all the time in the world, because she likely only made herself available for two hours. So now I know I'll have to have everything prepared for when I go shoot.
From experience in the other project we've done, when there is a time crunch, the easiest way to record is to do it chronologically. This helps with continuity, keeps order of clips that helps when editing, and it's easier to keep track of. I've seen several famous movie productions shot the same, even if it is for another variety of reasons. It has worked well for them, as nobody can deny the success of E.T. (1982), The Breakfast Club (1985), and The Texas Chainsaw Massacre (1974) are some highlights!
After much consideration and debating, I finally choose what to name my opening scene. But first I think I should trace my thought process, as it has probably been the hardest decision to make throughout this weeks. But maybe that's just me being indecisive.
When I first started this journey four weeks ago, and still thought I would go forward with my opening scene taking place eon the beach, I had an immediate name that I thought as perfect, Buried In Sand. I felt like it fit the initial theme of the drowning scene, mystery, suspense, etc. But with the change of setting, the name really stops fitting my project.
Now I have to take the new setting and changed in plot into account when thinking of a name. Taking place in a park, I think of trees, greenery, animals, picnics, etc. What I initially had as a name is good, but if I wanted something similar I had to translate it into the new scenery like the rest of my opening scene. Problem was, I didn't like anything I came up with that way.
So throwing away any resemblance to the first name I came up with, I had to connect it to something else. The characters. What they say, how they act. And as I have my complete script, I have landed in a name that perfectly summons the theme of my opening scene:
Gone.
My storyboard has been...tragic. Only because I'm terrible at drawing, so it's basically all doodles nobody can understand. So to make it easier, I used one of the websites given to us in one of our earlier projects to create storyboards online.
One of my favorite parts to plan has definitely been everything to do with the mise en scene. The props, location, and costuming have been something I wanted to be well though out. Since I have changed the initial location of my opening scene, from the beach to a park, I have had to rethink where I'm going to shot my project. The park I'll be using is close to the school, called Vista View, it has a lot of space I can think of to shoot as I've been there before. But, the part of the mise en scene that contributes to the storytelling is the costumes.
For each character I have an idea of what colors each of them would wear. Mostly to foreshadow, as the project focuses only on the opening scene of a film, the costume colors I chose are meant to give a hint of were the story would go. For Jocelyn, wearing light blue colors symbolize calm and trust, but I also see it as foreshadowing her future isolation as she processes the events that took place. And for Cassie, the color white of her top symbolizes purity and innocence, as she died at a young age.
Some picture to visualize:
This new outline going over the altered storyline is shorted than the first. Mostly because I tried to focus on following the story and not shot by shot as I've done before. I realized I didn't need to detail each shot in the outline, as it would be showed in the storyboard anyway. And the storyboard would focus on each shot instead of following the story. I feel like that way everything is easier to keep up with and more organized.
I've come into some issues with what I had planned so far. First, after getting advice, I realized the actual difficulty of making underwater scenes beyond what I was capable to do with a camera. It also raised question on safety, which is the most important part. After that, I was advice to focus more on the other parts of the story and not so much on the drowning. Even if that is what led me to come up with my story line. And last... well, I realized that scenes on the beach would prove very difficult given the time of year, and the unbearable heat.
Thankfully my problems have solutions, and they all narrow to changing bits of the storyline. First, I decided to change the location to a park/woods as it is easier to film there. Of course, the hazardous drowning scenes wouldn't take place either. The same premise of the story will remain, changing a few shots to fit the setting. Overall, I think the issues I've faced were easy to resolve, especially with guidance on how to tackle them. I'm excited to keep working!
FILM OPENING - GONE IT'S DONE! (thank god)